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11. Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

Choosing one career or multiple options throughout. It has been a debatable topic for decades. Some people stick to one career choice and love being experts in one field however there are people who love experiments, They opt for multiple career choices in one lifetime. They continue studying and growing up. They find one kind of work monotonous. As per me, Both approaches are correct and it should be the individual decision that how they want to pursue their career. The below essay shall discuss both ideologies and effects. First of all, there are people who love to do one kind of work throughout their life. They do not feel bored with one activity rather be expert in one particular field. They become experts gradually by doing one type of work and grow as a specialist in the career. They lead teams of those specific skills and teach the unique and expert ways of doing things. They earn a good amount of money after some experience and treated as genius in their field. On the contrary, there are people who like to do experiments in a career. They get bored with one kind of profile rather than prefer to keep changing job roles and try different options. They keep doors open for further studies at any given age. These kinds of people are fit for any profile because they carry vast experience of all fields. They crave new learning and growth opportunities. They are majorly creative and innovative people. To recapitulate, As mentioned earlier, both the situations are correct and have their own pros and cons. In my opinion, I would rather prefer an expert in one domain than some versatile and having vast experience in all fields. I am not denying the fact that both play an important role in the growth of an organization.

Choosing one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcourserace
career
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Some
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people
 stick to one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcourserace
career
 choice and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 being You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofessionalauthorityartist
experts
 in one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmeadowterritoryterrainrangegreengrassland
field
however
 there are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 experiments, They opt for multiple You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcourserace
career
 choices in one lifetime. They continue studying and growing up. They find one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsympatheticaffectionatecharitableamiablekindlykindhearted
kind
 of work monotonous. As per me, Both approaches are correct and it should be the individual decision that how they want to pursue their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcourserace
career
. The below essay shall discuss both ideologies and effects.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, there are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to do one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsympatheticaffectionatecharitableamiablekindlykindhearted
kind
 of work throughout their life. They do not feel bored with one activity rather
 be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadroitexperienceddeftskillfulskilledadept
expert
 in one particular You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmeadowterritoryterrainrangegreengrassland
field
. They become You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofessionalauthorityartist
experts
gradually
 by doing one type of work and grow as a specialist in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcourserace
career
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
They
 lead teams of those specific This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and teach the unique and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadroitexperienceddeftskillfulskilledadept
expert
 ways of doing things. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
They
 earn a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 amount of money after This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 experience and treated as genius in their field.

On the contrary
, there are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who like to do experiments in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcourserace
career
. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 bored with one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsympatheticaffectionatecharitableamiablekindlykindhearted
kind
 of profile rather
 than prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 changing job roles and try This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 options. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 doors open for further
 studies at any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 age. These You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsortbrandsettypevariety
kinds
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
are fit
 for any profile This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they carry vast experience of all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmeadowterritoryterrainrangegreengrassland
fields
. They crave new learning and growth opportunities. They are majorly
 creative and innovative This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

To recapitulate, As mentioned earlier, both the situations are correct and have their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 pros and cons. In my opinion, I would rather
 prefer an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadroitexperienceddeftskillfulskilledadept
expert
 in one domain than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 versatile and having vast experience in all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmeadowterritoryterrainrangegreengrassland
fields
. I The verb 'denying' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
am not denying
 the fact that both play an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 role in the growth of an organization. 