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wo images represent maps of road to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. There is a compass and key of bus stop and roundabout.

wo images represent maps of road to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. There is a compass and key of bus stop and roundabout. OkaM
Two images represent maps of road to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. There is a compass and key of bus stop and roundabout. City hospital was located in the North and surrounded by the Ring Road, both, in 2007 and in 2010. However, in 2010 there was built a public car park on the East from the hospital. Although car park in front of hospital still there, in 2010 not only staff was able to use this-it became public. Before, on the Hospital Road, there were 6 bus stops. After, in 2010, all 6 bus stops were gone and were built two roundabouts on both ends of the road. In addition, in 2010, there was built a bus station that is connected to roundabiouts.
Two images represent maps of road to a city
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hospital
in 2007 and in 2010. There is a compass and key of bus
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
and roundabout.

City
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
was located
in the North and surrounded by the Ring Road, both, in 2007 and in 2010.
However
, in 2010 there
was built
a public car park on the East from the hospital.

Although car park in front of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
still
there, in 2010 not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
staff was able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
this-it became public.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Before
, on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Hospital
Road, there were 6 bus
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stops
. After, in 2010, all 6 bus
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stops
were gone
and
were built
two roundabouts on both ends of the road.

In addition
, in 2010, there
was built
a bus station that
is connected
to
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roundabiouts
.
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IELTS academic wo images represent maps of road to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. There is a compass and key of bus stop and roundabout.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
127 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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