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Unemployment percentage of woman in 2013 and 2014

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A glance at the graph provides information about the unemployment rate among woman in 2013 and 2014. Looking from all prospectives readily apparent that the proportion of unoccupied woman have been witnessed a downward trajectory in almost all given countries, except in Scotland. Breaking that down further, it can be seen that in 2013, England has taken the lead in the proportion of unemployed women among all countries with approximately 6. 8%, However this percent decrease by 0. 3%. In contrast to wales were is represent merely 5. 4 % in 2013 and 5 in 2014 respectively. Moreover, the only country that have witnessed an upward trend is Scotland which the percentage of female workless increased with approximately 0. 6 making this country the highest percentage of woman unemployment. While in Northern Ireland

A glance at the graph provides information about the unemployment rate among woman in 2013 and 2014.

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 apparent that the proportion of unoccupied woman have been witnessed
 a downward trajectory in almost all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
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countries
, except in Scotland.

Breaking that down further
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 that in 2013, England has taken the lead in the proportion of unemployed women among all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 with approximately 6. 8%, However
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 5. 4 % in 2013 and 5 in 2014 respectively
.

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country
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