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The graph illustrates the number of guests on a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.

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The graph illustrates the number of guests on a particular Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. Overall, the number of people who were staying on cruise ships was the lowest, but it did not stop growing and in the end, it was higher than visitors who were staying on the island. Guests on the island started with bigger numbers than people who were waiting on cruise ships, however, at the end of the given time they did not beat the number of people staying on cruise ships. The total number of tourists was not big in the beginning, but it kept growing. In 2010, visitors staying on cruise ships were not more than 0. 5m, by 2011 it increased a little bit, but until 2012 the number of visitors was decreasing. From 2012, it started growing and by 2017 it reached 2 million. In 2010, the digits of people who were visiting the island were more than 0. 5m, it did not grow until 2011, however, it reached to 1. 5m by 2013 and kept the same numbers until 2015, it decreased in 2016 and in 2017 it got back to the same numbers it had from 2013 to 2015. Total number of visitors in 2010 was 1 million, from that time it kept growing until 2015, when the number was more than 2. 5m, from 2015 to 2016 it did not change anything and in 2016 it started growing again and by 2017 it reached to 3. 5m.
The graph illustrates the
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of guests on a particular Caribbean
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island
from 2010 to 2017.

Overall
, the
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of
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people
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were
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staying
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cruise
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ships
was the lowest,
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it did not
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growing and in the
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end
, it was higher than
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visitors
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who
were
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staying
on the
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island
. Guests on the
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started


with bigger
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numbers
than
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people
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who
were waiting on
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cruise
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,
however
, at the
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end
of the
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time they did not beat the
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people
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. The total
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of tourists was not

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in the beginning,
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it
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growing.

In 2010,
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on
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cruise
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were not more than 0.
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5m
, by 2011 it increased a
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,
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until 2012 the
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of
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was decreasing. From 2012, it
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started
growing and by 2017 it reached

2 million. In 2010, the digits of
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were visiting the
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were more than 0.
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5m
, it did not grow

until 2011,
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, it reached to 1.
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5m
by 2013 and
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the same
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until 2015, it decreased in

2016 and in 2017 it
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back to the same
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it had from 2013 to 2015. Total
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of
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2010 was 1 million, from that time it
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growing until 2015, when the
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was more than 2.
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5m
,

from 2015 to 2016 it did not
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anything and in 2016 it
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started
growing again and by 2017 it

reached to 3.
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5m
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