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the proportion of the amount of divorce in Finland and Sweden during the period from 2011 to 2015.

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The given bar chart compere the proportion of the amount of divorce in Finland and Sweden during the period from 2011 to 2015. The general overview here is that from 2011 to 2014, the divorce rate of Sweden higher than Finland on the contrary in 2015, the rate of Finland higher than Sweden. At the beginning of the period, in 2011, the Finland’s divorce rate accounted for under 40 per cent, whereas Sweden exceeded it, at just over 40 per cent. over the Next year, in 2012, the divorce amount of Finland declined slightly to merely over 30 per cent. In contrast, the amount of divorce in Sweden minimally increase to the peak at almost 50 per cent. On the other hand, Over next two years, the number of Sweden’s divorce dropped slightly, while the divorce number of Finland rose steadily, the rates became a similar, with both countries standing between merely over 40 per cent and 40 per cent, respectively. It is interesting to note that the amount of Sweden’s divorce fell moderately to over 30 per cent in 2015. At the end of the period, the percentage of Finland’s divorce higher that Sweden
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IELTS academic the proportion of the amount of divorce in Finland and Sweden during the period from 2011 to 2015.

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