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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the proportion of under ground railway in six various cities (London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles). The passengers per year is measured by millions. Looking from the overall perspective, it is crystal clear that Paris and Tokyo had highest number of passengers and Kyoto and Los Angeles had the lowest. London railway system was the oldest that initiated in 1863 and the whole route was 394km and there were 775 million passengers in a single as well. However, Los Angeles railway was opened in 2001 and there were only 50 million passengers and the route were just around 28km. Both Paris and Tokyo embarked in 1900 and 1927 and moreover they had the most quantity of passengers more than 1000 million and the whole route were more than 150 km as well. The railway systems in Washington DC and Kyoto were started in around 1980s. It is evident that 11km was the shortest route that produced in Kyoto and the amount of passengers per year was 45 million and on the contrary, Washington Dc had 144 million people and the whole route was around 130km.
The table illustrates the proportion of under ground
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railway
in six various cities (London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles). The
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passengers
per year
is measured
by millions.

Looking from the
overall
perspective, it is crystal
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that Paris and Tokyo had highest number of
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passengers
and Kyoto and Los Angeles had the lowest.

London
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system was the oldest that initiated in 1863 and the whole
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route
was 394km and there were 775
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million
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passengers
in a single
as well
.
However
, Los Angeles
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railway
was opened
in 2001 and there were
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only
50
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million
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passengers
and the
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route
were
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just
around 28km. Both Paris and Tokyo embarked in 1900 and 1927 and
moreover
they had the most quantity of
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passengers
more than 1000
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million
and the whole
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route
were more than 150 km
as well
. The
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railway
systems in Washington DC and Kyoto were
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started
in around 1980s. It is evident that 11km was the shortest
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route
that produced in Kyoto and the amount of
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passengers
per year was 45
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million
and
on the contrary
, Washington Dc had 144
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million
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people
and the whole
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route
was around 130km.

IELTS academic The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

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