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The table provides statistics about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in the year 2016.

The table shows average sales of a restaurant’s three different branches in the year 2016 each of which was located in Vancouver city, Canada. Overall, restaurant in Georgia street made the biggest sale ($10. 69) among the three branches and the least sale occurred from Dunsmuir street branch ($5. 61). Georgia street branch seemed very popular among the three branches. From the table, it is clear that Georgia street branch made the highest number of transactions and Drake street branch made almost half transactions compared to that of Georgia which was the lowest one. Among these three branches, people used to like eating in Georgia street branch since the number of eat-in transactions was the highest making up to 405 transactions whereas Drake street branch made half transactions compared to that of Georgia. In addition, take away food was most popular in Georgia street branch and least number of transactions for take away food came from Drake street branch. However, the difference in number of take away transactions for Georgia and Dunsmuir branch is insignificant compared to that of Drake street. In these three restaurants, foods made up with chicken were the most popular food items.
The table
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shows
average sales of a restaurant’s three
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different
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branches
in the year 2016 each of which
was located
in Vancouver city, Canada.

Overall
, restaurant in Georgia
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street
made the biggest sale ($10. 69) among the three
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branches
and the least sale occurred from
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Dunsmuir
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street
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branch
($5. 61). Georgia
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street
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branch
seemed
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very
popular among the three branches.

From the table, it is
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clear
that Georgia
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street
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branch
made the highest
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number
of
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transactions
and Drake
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street
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branch
made almost half
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transactions
compared to that of Georgia which was the lowest one. Among these three
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branches
,
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people
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used
to like eating in Georgia
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street
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branch
since the
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number
of eat-in
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transactions
was the highest making up to 405
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transactions
whereas Drake
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street
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branch
made half
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transactions
compared to that of Georgia.

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, take away
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food
was most popular in Georgia
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street
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branch
and least
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number
of
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transactions
for take away
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food
came from Drake
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street
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branch
.
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, the difference in
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number
of take away
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transactions
for Georgia and
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Dunsmuir
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branch
is insignificant compared to that of Drake
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street
. In these three restaurants,
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foods
made up with chicken were the most popular
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food
items.
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IELTS academic The table provides statistics about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in the year 2016.

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4 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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