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The table illustrates in 2002, people who live in five different countries, expenditure by different items.

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The table illustrates in 2002, people who live in five different countries, expenditure by different items. Overall, it can clearly be seen that there were a big gap among the percentages of five countries consumer expenditure by Food/Drinks/Tobacco. The total percentage of Turkey consumer expenditure by Food/Drinks/Tobacco and Leisure/Clothes were the highest. As can be seen from the table, the percentage of Turkey consumer expenditure by Food/Drinks/Tobacco was the highest (32, 14%), followed by that of Ireland (28, 91%). The percentage of Sweden consumer expenditure by Food/Drinks/Tobacco was the lowest (15, 77%). It is worth noticing that, the percentage of Italy consumer expenditure by Clothing/Footwear achieved 9%, which was 3, 6% more than Sweden (5, 4%). The percentage of Spain consumer expenditure by Leisure/Education was the lowest, which was 2, 3% less than that of Spain (1, 98% and 4, 35%, respectively).
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Food/Drinks/Tobacco
was the highest (32, 14%), followed by that of Ireland (28, 91%). The
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percentage
of Sweden
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consumer
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by
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Food/Drinks/Tobacco
was the lowest (15, 77%).

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of Italy
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by Clothing/Footwear achieved 9%, which was 3, 6% more than Sweden (5, 4%). The
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of Spain
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by Leisure/Education was the lowest, which was 2, 3% less than that of Spain (1, 98% and 4, 35%,
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IELTS academic The table illustrates in 2002, people who live in five different countries, expenditure by different items.

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