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The table below shows the weight of people in a particular country from 1999 to 2009.

The table below shows the weight of people in a particular country from 1999 to 2009. 7rrgA
The shown table depicts the information of different fitness level among people in a particular country between 1999 and 2009. overall, it's clear that half of the percentage of both men and women fall under normal weight. In addition, while overweight man declined by the given period, women increased their figures. In 1999, there were 49% of women, who had normal weight, in underweight about half of that amount existed. Only 18% of the females were witnessed overweight in initial year. similarly, half of the figure had seen in underweight category of normal weight men. Much higher than women, 30% of the malws were in the overweight category. Both men and women Rose their percentages from 49 per cent to 51 per cent in the 2004 and 41% to 48% in 2004 respectively, they both had 47% of normal weight in the 2009. However, when you went down with regard to overweight, at 23%, while women grows by 3% before reaching to the percentage of 19% each in the 2009. Only 1 percent decrease have seen in underweight female, but it increased by 3% in case of the female counterparts after 5 years.
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fitness level among
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people
in a particular country between 1999 and 2009.

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overall
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that half of the percentage of both
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men
and
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women
fall under
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normal
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weight
.
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, while
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overweight
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man
declined by the
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given
period,
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women
increased their figures.

In 1999, there were 49% of
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women
, who had
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normal
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weight
, in underweight about half of that amount existed.
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Only
18% of the females
were witnessed
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overweight
in initial year.
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similarly
, half of the figure had
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seen
in underweight category of
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normal
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weight
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men
. Much higher than
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women
, 30% of the
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malws
were in the
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overweight
category.

Both
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and
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women
Rose their percentages from 49 per cent to 51 per cent in the 2004 and 41% to 48% in 2004
respectively
, they both had 47% of
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normal
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weight
in the 2009.
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, when you went down with regard to
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overweight
, at 23%, while
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women
grows by 3%
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before
reaching to the percentage of 19% each in the 2009.
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1 percent decrease have
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seen
in underweight female,
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it increased by 3% in case of the female counterparts after 5 years.
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