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The mulpiple-line graphs represent the number of tourists that visited a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.

The mulpiple-line graphs represent the number of tourists that visited a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. 111KX

The mulpiple-line graphs represent the number of tourists that visited a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. As it can be seen in the graphs, there were an increasing trend in the total number of visitors. However, it is obvious that there were a marginal differences between visitors that stayed on cruise ships and tourists that stayed on island. In 2010, about one million tourists visited the island. Around three out of four tourists in that year stayed on island while this figure was one in four for visitors that stayed on cruise ships. In the middle of the 2015, the number of visitors staying on cruise ships exceeded from the number of tourists staying on island. Finally, in 2017, two millions of visitors were in the staying on cruise ships group whilst this number was slightly lower in the staying on island group. As shown in the graph, the total number of visitors of the island increased over the period of the time. Although a sharp rise occured from 2010 to 2015, a period of stability was seen between 2015 and 2016. However, the total number of visitors showed a dramatic improvement from 2016 to 2017.

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visitors
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As shown in the graph, the total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
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visitors
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island
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visitors
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 a dramatic improvement from 2016 to 2017. 