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The presented diagram elucidates an illustration of the life cycle of a plant with fruit.

The presented diagram elucidates an illustration of the life cycle of a plant with fruit. 7053A
The presented diagram elucidates an illustration of the life cycle of a plant with fruit. Overall, it is a natural and cyclical process with eight phrases, commencing from planting seeds into the ground and blossoming a flower with fruits. At the initial stage, plant from the fruit with seeds; then, it will be germination, after that, it will sprout, Subsequently, in seeding stage, it will be bigger than before. Middle stages, it will have more leafs and faller during this period; meanwhile, it will blossom At the final stage, it will have fruits after it blossomed.
The presented diagram elucidates an illustration of the life cycle of a plant with fruit.

Overall
, it is a natural and cyclical process with eight phrases, commencing from planting seeds into the ground and blossoming a flower with fruits.

At the initial
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, plant from the fruit with seeds; then, it will be germination, after that, it will sprout,

Subsequently
, in seeding
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stage
, it will be bigger than
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before
. Middle
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stages
, it will have more leafs and
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faller
during this period; meanwhile, it will
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blossom


At the final
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stage
, it will have fruits after it blossomed.
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IELTS academic The presented diagram elucidates an illustration of the life cycle of a plant with fruit.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
96 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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