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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

The table illustrates data about how people spend their money on 3 different categories in Ireland, Sweden, Turkey, Italy and Spain in 2002. What stands out from the graph that, while food/tobacco spending was dominant in all 5 countries, less money was spent on clothing/education. Turning to the details, food/drinks/tobacco expenditures constituted one third in Turkey and Ireland, meanwhile Italy, Spain, Sweden spent 16%, 18%, 15% respectively in 2002. On the other hand, clothing/footwear was less popular, however, around 6% of money was expended on it in Ireland, Spain and Turkey. In addition, expenditures on clothing/footware in Italy and Sweden shared 9% and 5. 4% of market respectively. Finally, the least money was spent on leisure/education in all 5 countries, thus, money was spent on this item in Sweden and Italy was almost equal comprising for 3%, whereas money spend on it was less than 5% in each of other 3 countries.
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categories in Ireland, Sweden, Turkey, Italy and Spain in 2002.

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on clothing/education.

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, food/drinks/tobacco expenditures constituted one third in Turkey and Ireland, meanwhile Italy, Spain, Sweden
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16%, 18%, 15%
respectively
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on it in Ireland, Spain and Turkey.
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in Italy and Sweden shared 9% and 5. 4% of market
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was
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on leisure/education in all 5 countries,
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on this item in Sweden and Italy was almost equal comprising for 3%, whereas
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spend on it was less than 5% in each of other 3 countries.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

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