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The table below depicts the information about the posts held by women in parliament and in management in 5 countries in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below depicts the information about the posts held by women in parliament and in management in 5 countries in 2000. dY8r
The table illustrates the information regarding the posts held by women in government and management in different 5 countries in the year 2000. Overall, it can be seen that the highest number of seats held of government in canada, while management seats in Rome. To begin with, women held highest number of seats in Canada for government, while only 10% is available in Rome. In contrast, management seat are in Canada is only 36%. it is for both management and government seats in Egupt and Rome is same about 52%. Moreover, seats are held that is common in Ukraine and italy 40%, respectively. Furthermore, Ukraine government seat held around 23% and that the same in management italy seat at 25%.
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IELTS academic The table below depicts the information about the posts held by women in parliament and in management in 5 countries in 2000.

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