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The table above provides the figure of the British traveling by different types of transportation in England during the period from 1985 to 2000, (which are) measured in miles.

The table above provides the figure of the British traveling by different types of transportation in England during the period from 1985 to 2000, (which are) measured in miles. 2Rk2k
The table above provides the figure of the British traveling by different types of transportation in England during the period from 1985 to 2000, (which are) measured in miles. Overall, the popularity of Walking, Bicycle and Car were reported with a decreasing trend while that of Local bus, Long distance bus as well as Train together with Taxi and Other were recorded with an increasing pattern. It can be seen that, the amount of people using car was the most widely used in England from 1985 to 2000. A closer look at the table reveals that, in 1985, the data of trips travelling by the British in Car were reported with a noticeable jump, accounting for 3, 199 miles, which ranked at the first position among eight types of transportation. This was followed by a group of other means ( 450 miles), Local bus ( 429 miles ), Train ( 289 miles ), Walking ( 255 miles ), Long distance bus ( 54 miles ) as well as Bicycle ( 51 miles ). Allocations for Taxi were the most insignificant, accounting for only 13 miles. For the next 15 years, the proportion of Local bus saw a considerable rise, with 274 miles and that of Walking together with Bicycle were recorded with a slight decline, with the former reducing to 237 miles and the latter decreasing to 41 miles. An opposite pattern can be seen in the people number using Car, Long distance bus, Train as well as Taxi and Other were witnessed with a sharp growth, rising up to 4, 806 miles, 124 miles, 366 miles, 42 miles and 585 miles per person per year, respectively during the given period.
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types of transportation in England during the period from 1985 to 2000, (which are) measured in miles.

Overall
, the popularity of Walking, Bicycle and
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Car
were reported
with a decreasing trend while that of Local bus, Long distance bus
as well
as Train together with Taxi and Other
were recorded
with an increasing pattern. It can be
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seen
that, the amount of
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people
using
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was the most
widely
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used
in England from 1985 to 2000.

A closer look at the table reveals that, in 1985, the data of trips travelling by the British in
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Car
were reported
with a noticeable jump, accounting for 3,
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199 miles
, which ranked at the
first
position among eight types of transportation. This
was followed
by a group of other means
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(
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450 miles
), Local bus
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429 miles
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, Train
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289 miles
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, Walking
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255 miles
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, Long distance bus
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54 miles
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as well
as Bicycle
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51 miles
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. Allocations for Taxi were the most insignificant, accounting for
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13 miles
. For the
next
15 years, the proportion of Local bus
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saw
a considerable rise, with
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274 miles
and that of Walking together with Bicycle
were recorded
with a slight decline, with the former reducing to
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237 miles
and the latter decreasing to
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41 miles
. An opposite pattern can be
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seen
in the
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people
number using
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Car
, Long distance bus, Train
as well
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were witnessed
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806 miles
,
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124 miles
,
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366 miles
,
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42 miles
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585 miles
per person per year,
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IELTS academic The table above provides the figure of the British traveling by different types of transportation in England during the period from 1985 to 2000, (which are) measured in miles.

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