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The supplied line graph compares the proportion of oil production and consumption in China throughout the years between 1982 and 2006.

The supplied line graph compares the proportion of oil production and consumption in China throughout the years between 1982 and 2006. kWK0N
The supplied line graph compares the proportion of oil production and consumption in China throughout the years between 1982 and 2006. Overall, it could be plainly seen that the number of oil between manufacture and expanding was trended in both increased in the years from 1982 to 2006. In addition, the amount of oil production improved a plateau while the figure for oil consumption rose rapidly during the period shown. It is explicitly observed that in the first four years, the amount of oil production went up 1 million oil barrels but compared to the number of oil consumption is still a flat which is 2 million oil barrels in during 1982-2006. On the contrary, oil production remained stable steadily throughout the years from 1986 to 1994 while oil consumption was significant a climb about 1. 5 million oil barrels. On the other hand, during 1994-2006, the oil manufacture uplifted slowly just around 3. 5 million barrels not much as the oil consumption which moved upward enormously about 6. 2 million barrels, thus both oil it could be predicted to jump considerably in the near future. From the graphs, it is quite evident that the oil production industry of China will be increase rapidly in the coming times.
The supplied line graph compares the proportion of
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in China throughout the years between 1982 and 2006.

Overall
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plainly
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seen
that the number of
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oil
between manufacture and expanding
was trended
in both increased in the years from 1982 to 2006.
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, the amount of
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oil
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production
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improved
a plateau while the figure for
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oil
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consumption
rose
rapidly
during the period shown.

It is
explicitly
observed that in the
first
four years, the amount of
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oil
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production
went up 1
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million
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oil
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barrels
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but
compared to the number of
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consumption
is
still
a flat which is 2
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million
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oil
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barrels
in during 1982-2006.
On the contrary
,
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oil
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production
remained stable
steadily
throughout the years from 1986 to 1994 while
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consumption
was significant a climb about 1. 5
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oil
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.
On the other hand
, during 1994-2006, the
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manufacture uplifted
slowly
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around 3. 5
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million
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barrels
not much as the
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which
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moved
upward
enormously
about 6. 2
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,
thus
both
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it could
be predicted
to jump
considerably
in the near future.

From the graphs, it is quite evident that the
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industry of China will be increase
rapidly
in the coming times.
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