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the plan below show tzhabei high school in 1990 and 2010

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The plans display Zhsbei High School changed in 1990 and 2010 from school property to the private portion of the school. The Zhabei High School in the year 1990 has one big gym, three science labs, one boarding school, four classrooms, a canteen, a library, and four basketball courts. In the year 2010, Zhabei High school's portion was converted into private property with two apartments and shops at the place of boarding school and two basketball courts were used for this change. Moreover, there was a road a rainwater tank and a recycling zone added at that place. The gym is separated into two parts with the classroom. There were many other things added such as the science lab divided into four sections with biology lab, chemistry lab, physics lab and industrial technology lab. Overall, There were massive changes made by schools in 2010 with many aidful amenities.
The plans display
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Zhsbei
High
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changed
in 1990 and 2010 from
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school
property to the private portion of the school.

The
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Zhabei
High
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School
in the year 1990 has one
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big
gym, three science
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labs
, one boarding
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school
, four classrooms, a canteen, a library, and four basketball courts.

In the year 2010,
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Zhabei
High school's portion
was converted
into private property with two apartments and shops at the place of boarding
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school
and two basketball courts were
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used
for this
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change
.
Moreover
, there was a road a rainwater tank and a recycling zone
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added
at that place. The gym
is separated
into two parts with the classroom. There were
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many
other things
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added
such as the science
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lab
divided into four sections with biology
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lab
, chemistry
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lab
, physics
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lab
and industrial technology lab.

Overall
, There were massive
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changes
made by
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schools
in 2010 with
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many
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aidful
amenities.
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IELTS academic the plan below show tzhabei high school in 1990 and 2010

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