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The plan below depicts the public park, It also shows the Park opened in 1920 and the park today.

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The plan below depicts the public park, It also shows the Park opened in 1920 and the park today. Overall, The Grange park in 1920 and the present one, the structure is the same, Whereas the interiors plans are varied from the past one variance in the Center was fountain aus it was significantly placed replaced beautifully by Rose garden sorrounded by the seats, where peonle can sit and admire the flower, Butterflies and the park In Addition, At the left side the in past period, stage ele pol musician was build and now it is renovalad in t0 Amphitheatre bos concert cod As "it helps +0 conduet mose different programmes, Again, the Rose gardens at Both the sides us only placed left side in the Present one Rose Garden Pand tos water nants are replaced as. cafe which is most needed tot people and older one's and. as children's play area, +0 attract the children and seats and ejlass house were remodeled +0 Water feature eus wie have enough number of seate in concert Anea in Indeed Entrance there's new ore a p undes ground teresa fan € car park
The plan below depicts the public

park, It
also
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shows
the Park opened in 1920 and the

park
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today
.

Overall
, The Grange park in 1920 and the present one, the structure is the same, Whereas the interiors

plans
are varied
from the

past one variance

in the

Center

was fountain

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aus


it

was

significantly


placed

replaced

beautifully


by

Rose garden

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sorrounded


by

the

seats, where

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peonle


can

sit

and admire the flower,

Butterflies

and

the

park

In Addition
,

At

the

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left


side

the

in past period, stage

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ele


pol

musician

was

build and

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now
it

is
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renovalad


in t0

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Amphitheatre


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bos


concert cod As

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"
it
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helps


+0

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conduet


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mose


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different


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programmes
,

Again,

the

Rose

gardens at

Both

the

sides

us

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only


placed

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left


side

in the

Present

one

Rose

Garden

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Pand
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tos


water
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nants


are replaced


as.

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cafe
which

is most needed

tot

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people


and older one's and.
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as


children's

play

area, +0

attract the children

and seats

and

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ejlass
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house


were remodeled


+0

Water feature

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eus


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wie


have

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enough


number

of

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seate


in

concert

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Anea


in

Indeed


Entrance

there's

new ore

a p

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undes
ground

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teresa


fan

€

car
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IELTS academic The plan below depicts the public park, It also shows the Park opened in 1920 and the park today.

Academic
  American English
7 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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