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The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to China and India. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to China and India. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. 0pA31
The three pie charts give information about the average usage of nutrition in the world in terms of the five significant categories Animal food, Vegetable and fruits, Nuts and seeds and Processed food in 2008 in contrast to China and India. Overall, a large number of processed foods was contributed by the world’s population compared to India and China. However, both in these nations nuts and seeds are eaten by more in a given period. First, utilization of animal food was essentially worldwide (27%) and in India(26%). At the same time, China accounted for less than 20 percent. The percentage of the average consumption of raw materials like vegetables and fruits was almost third in China. On the other hand, these raw materials only contribute 23% of the total diet of Indians and 29 % of the world’s population. People in this world are 41% processed food that was the highest consumed food in 2008 compared to both the given nations. India used 39%. Processed food whereas Chinese people ate 5% less than India. Besides this, nuts and seeds eaten by the world were just 4% (lowest among all the types). On the other hand, Indians ate almost 11 percent, but the Chinese consumed 19 %…
The three pie charts give information about the average usage of nutrition in the
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world
in terms of the five significant categories Animal
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food
, Vegetable and fruits, Nuts and seeds and
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Processed
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food
in 2008
in contrast
to China and India.

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,
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a large number of
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processed
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foods
was contributed
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world’s
population compared to India and China.
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by more in a
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period.

First
, utilization of animal
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food
was
essentially
worldwide (27%) and in India(26%). At the same time, China accounted for less than 20 percent. The percentage of the average consumption of raw materials like vegetables and fruits was almost third in China.
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, these raw materials
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contribute 23% of the total diet of Indians and 29 % of the
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world’s
population.

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are 41%
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processed
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food
that was the highest consumed
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food
in 2008 compared to both the
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given
nations. India
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39%.
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Processed
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whereas Chinese
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ate 5% less than India.
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were
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4% (lowest among all the types).
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IELTS academic The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to China and India. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

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