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The Pie- Chart provides an overview of the percentages of different languages contributing to the origination of English as a language.

The Pie- Chart provides an overview of the percentages of different languages contributing to the origination of English as a language. OJBk
The Pie- Chart provides an overview of the percentages of different languages contributing to the origination of English as a language. Overall, three languages namely French, Latin and Germanic Languages have contributed largely in originating the English language with a considerably smaller contribution from Greek, other Languages/unknown, and Derived from proper names. The influence of French and Latin is exactly the same at 29% and that of Germanic Language is moderately less at 26%. These three languages, combined together have contributed to more than 80% of the total origin. In contrast, Languages such as Greek, Other languages/unknown, and Derived from proper names have significantly smaller contributions towards the origin of English at 6%, 6%, and 4% respectively.
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