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The picture below shows the development of certain areas of the island with some tourist facilities

The picture below shows the development of certain areas of the island with some tourist facilities nrwg
The maps illustrate the development of some tourists amenities which have taken place in an island. Overall, the island has witnessed dramatic changes especially it has been made accesible. however, eastern part is the same as it was. To begin with the Pier, it was constructed to south direction which is used for entrance in Ireland. And pier is also place where use for ships space. On the North-west side of the Pier, reception was developed and around the reception, a vehicle track was built which connecting to a pier. Restaurant was erected to the South part of the island and slightly over to the reception, a vehicle track also joint a restaurant and reception. Turning to the accommodation, it was the added on both the side, west and east, of the reception. A sidewalk was built surrounding the cottages I am also make way to reach to the beach. Swimming, a new facility, set up for the tourist and it is located to the west part of the island. In spite of without affecting nature, Island converted into considerably developed tourist place.
The maps illustrate the development of
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tourists amenities which have taken place in an
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.
Overall
, the
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island
has witnessed dramatic
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changes
especially
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been made
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accesible
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however
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begin
with the
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Pier
, it
was constructed
to south direction which is
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used
for entrance in Ireland. And
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pier
is
also
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place
where
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use
for ships space. On the North-west side of the
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Pier
,
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reception
was developed
and around the
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reception
, a vehicle
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track
was built
which connecting to a
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pier
. Restaurant
was erected
to the South part of the
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island
and
slightly
over to the
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reception
, a vehicle
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track
also
joint a restaurant and
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reception
. Turning to the accommodation, it was the
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added
on both the side, west and east, of the
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reception
. A sidewalk
was built
surrounding the cottages I am
also
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make
way to reach to the beach. Swimming, a new facility, set up for the tourist and it
is located
to the west part of the
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island
.
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In spite of
without affecting nature,
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Island
converted into
considerably
developed tourist place.
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IELTS academic The picture below shows the development of certain areas of the island with some tourist facilities

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