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the percentage of New Zealand population

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The graph illustrates the boost resident rate over the period between 1950 and 2050 in New Zealand. Overall, the figures for under 14 and around 38 to 45 years old are predicted to experience a upward trend over the 100-year period, while those aged 25 to 37 and over 65 years old are expected to decline. Remarkably, the portion of those aged over 65 made up more than the others. According to the chart, the percentage of the dwellers aged 14 and under went down slightly from 5% to 2% over 40% years, before growing gradually to around 20% in 2050. While the figure for 38 to 45 years old witnessed a dramatic leap by 24% between 1950 and 1990, it is predicted that the number will take downward trend with 39% of the citizens. As can be seen from the graph, both groups with 25 to 37 and over 65 years old increased marginally approximately between 1% and 9% during a 40-year period, followed by reducing constantly at about 1% and 51% of population respectively.
The graph illustrates the boost resident rate
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the period between 1950 and 2050 in New Zealand.

Overall
, the figures for under 14 and around 38 to 45 years
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are predicted
to experience
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a
upward trend
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over
the
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100-year
period, while those aged 25 to 37 and
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65 years
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are
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to decline.
Remarkably
, the portion of those aged
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65 made up more than the others.

According to the chart, the percentage of the dwellers aged 14 and
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under went
down
slightly
from 5% to 2%
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over
40% years,
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growing
gradually
to around 20% in 2050. While the figure for 38 to 45 years
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witnessed a dramatic leap by 24% between 1950 and 1990, it
is predicted
that the number will take downward trend with 39% of the citizens.

As can be
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seen
from the graph, both groups with 25 to 37 and
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over
65 years
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increased
marginally
approximately between 1% and 9% during a
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40-year
period, followed by reducing
constantly
at about 1% and 51% of population
respectively
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