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The following chart shows the top 10 destinations for Australian residents. In the years from2000 to 2011, the population is the highest at NZ in the black column.

The following chart shows the top 10 destinations for Australian residents. In the years from2000 to 2011, the population is the highest at NZ in the black column. Mq3oN

The following chart shows the top 10 destinations for Australian residents. In the years from2000 to 2011, the population is the highest at NZ in the black column. And the shortest is Fiji. The population is in the black from NZ to UK sometimes increases and decreases about 10 to 6. The black column from China to Hong Kong is down and up. The bar is divided into 2 columns. the grey columns, Nz is still the highest and The shortest is Malaysia and Hong Kong. From NZ to the UK is rise but China to Hong Kong is so short. In sum, The population is focused on a large crowd in NZ. And the other countries are spread increase and decreases not ensure

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 the top 10 destinations for Australian residents. In the years from2000 to 2011, the population is the highest at NZ in the black You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlistfile
column
. And the shortest is Fiji. The population is in the black from NZ to UK This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 increases and decreases about 10 to 6. Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
The black You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlistfile
column
 from China to Hong Kong is down and up. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 bar is divided
 into 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlistfile
columns
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
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grey
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, Possible spelling mistake found.NZNoNPNuOzNY
Nz
 is still
 the highest and The shortest is Malaysia and Hong Kong. From NZ to the UK is rise This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 China to Hong Kong is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 short. In sum, The population is focused
 on a large crowd in NZ. And the other countries are spread
 increase and decreases not Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphensure.ensure!ensure?ensure:ensure,ensure;
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