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The following chart shows the top 10 destinations for Australian residents. In the years from2000 to 2011, the population is the highest at NZ in the black column.

The following chart shows the top 10 destinations for Australian residents. In the years from2000 to 2011, the population is the highest at NZ in the black column. Mq3oN
The following chart shows the top 10 destinations for Australian residents. In the years from2000 to 2011, the population is the highest at NZ in the black column. And the shortest is Fiji. The population is in the black from NZ to UK sometimes increases and decreases about 10 to 6.   The black column from China to Hong Kong is down and up. The bar is divided into 2 columns. the grey columns, Nz is still the highest and The shortest is Malaysia and Hong Kong. From NZ to the UK is rise but China to Hong Kong is so short. In sum, The population is focused on a large crowd in NZ. And the other countries are spread increase and decreases not ensure
The following chart
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the top 10 destinations for Australian residents. In the years from2000 to 2011, the population is the highest at NZ in the black
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. And the shortest is Fiji. The population is in the black from NZ to UK
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increases and decreases about 10 to 6.
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The black
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column
from China to Hong Kong is down and up.
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Nz
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the highest and The shortest is Malaysia and Hong Kong. From NZ to the UK is rise
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China to Hong Kong is
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short. In sum, The population
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on a large crowd in NZ. And the other countries
are spread
increase and decreases not
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IELTS academic The following chart shows the top 10 destinations for Australian residents. In the years from2000 to 2011, the population is the highest at NZ in the black column.

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124 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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