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The maps show the changes that have taken place in Island in the past and now

The maps show the changes that have taken place in Island in the past and now QLgxb
The given maps illustrate distinctness in the appearance of Paradise Island from past until presentAt the first it is clear that Paradise Island has been minor improvements in its instructure. Today the Island dramatically turned into developed this area in which more commuter facilities and leisure structures have been put up. The map provided on west of the Island there were boat and apartments in the past. Whereas, the building has been converted to a Hotel complex also in the
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Island
from past until
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presentAt
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Island
has been minor improvements in its
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Today
the
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dramatically
turned into developed this area in which more commuter facilities and leisure structures have
been put
up. The map provided on west of the
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Island
there were boat and apartments in the past.
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IELTS academic The maps show the changes that have taken place in Island in the past and now

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
79 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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