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The bar charts show the information honey-bee colonies and honey production in US. The bar charts show data on the number of bee colonies in the United States and how much honey they produced in a period- 40 year. It is clear that the number of bee hives and the production are fluctuated in first 20 years. And they are both decreased dramatically in last 20 years of this period. Between 1970 and 1980, the charts show opposite trends, the figure of bee hives in increased and reach peak at 4. 2 million in 1980. By contrast, in the same period, the amount of honey produced declined from 13. 000 tonnes to 11. 000 tonnes before it went up approximate 10. 000 tonnes in 1990 From 1990 to 2010, there have been downward trends in their figures. The honey bee population felt down sharply each year with the last figure below 2 million in 2010. Similarly, honey production also dropped down significantly from 120. 000 tonnes to 100. 000 tonnes, to approximate 20. 000 tonnes with figure lower than bee colonies in the same periods

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 the information honey-bee colonies and honey production in US.

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show
 data on the number of bee colonies in the United States and how much honey they produced in a period- 40 year.

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clear
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