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The maps below show exports of rubber ducks from 2013 to 2017.

The maps below show exports of rubber ducks from 2013 to 2017. 2R2Y6
The provided information which has been displayed on the line graph shows the number of rubber ducks which are exported by three different nations over the periods of 4 year commencing in 2013. Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that the export of rubber ducks in Eu and UK experienced an upward trend from 2013 to 2017 with the exception of USA. From the beginning in 2013, the amount of exported rubber ducks in EU was the highest which accounted for 30000. In Eu, this figure rose dramatically before reduced significantly to approximately 22000 between 2013 and 2015. There was a gradually increase in the export of rubber ducks in UK from 20000 to nearly 24000 in the same period. The amount of it among Eu and UK both increased significantly to about 40000 in 2017. In contrast, there was a rise in the amount of exported rubber ducks in USA from 10000 to 15000 between 2013 and 2014, after that it witnessed a gradually reduction to nearly 3000 in the end of the period.
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nations over the periods of 4 year commencing in 2013. Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that the export of
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rubber
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in Eu and UK experienced an upward trend from 2013 to 2017
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USA. From the beginning in 2013, the amount of exported
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in EU was the highest which accounted for 30000. In Eu, this figure rose
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before
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reduced
significantly
to approximately 22000 between 2013 and 2015. There was a
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in the export of
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in UK from 20000 to
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24000 in the same period. The amount of it among Eu and UK both increased
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, there was a rise in the amount of exported
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from 10000 to 15000 between 2013 and 2014, after that it witnessed a
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