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describe the Changes of the island

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The chart illustrates the island with some differences as “before” and “after”. The figure "before" shows an empty arena with only a small number of trees, then in the second picture there are a number of spectacular changes took place with the construction of territory. Overall, after the modification, some trees were cut down to build buildings and footpaths. The reception was settled down in the center of the island. It was surrounded by houses, and nearby there is a restaurant and vehicle track leading to the sea and boats. Accommodations are arranged in a circle one is located on the west, and the second on the east. A T-shaped pier that overlooks the sea has two boats. While the beach situated at the top of left side has a swimming area.
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differences as “
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before
” and “after”. The figure
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before
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shows
an empty arena with
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only
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small
number of trees, then in the second picture there are a number of spectacular
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changes
took place with the construction of territory.

Overall
, after the modification,
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some
trees were
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cut
down to build buildings and footpaths. The reception
was settled
down in the center of the island. It
was surrounded
by
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houses
, and nearby there is a restaurant and vehicle
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track
leading to the sea and boats. Accommodations
are arranged
in a circle one
is located
on the west, and the second on the east. A T-shaped pier that overlooks the sea has two boats.
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While
the beach situated at the top of
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side has a swimming area.
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IELTS academic describe the Changes of the island

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  American English
2 paragraphs
132 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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