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The figures below compare the requirements for different subjects at well center between 2017 and 2018.

The figures below compare the requirements for different subjects at well center between 2017 and 2018. bDxo6
A glance at the two pie-charts provided reveals the demands for diverse sciences at well center from 2017 and 2018. It is apparent from the information supplied that two subjects of four boomed during the years in question. Requirements for English cover exactly a quarter in 2017 and slightly over a third in 2018. Meanwhile, demands for the Russian language were 15 percent in the first year and went up to exactly a quarter in the next year. In stark contrast, however, both other activities plunged in necessity. Requirements for math which was the first required subject in 2017, accounting for 40 percent. But it dropped dramatically to just under a fifth in 2018. Demands for history were exactly a fifth in 2017 and a slightly lower 19 percent in 2018.
A glance at the two pie-charts provided reveals the demands for diverse sciences at well center
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from 2017 and 2018
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It is apparent from the information supplied that two subjects of four
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boomed
during the years in question. Requirements for English cover exactly a quarter in 2017 and
slightly
over a third in 2018. Meanwhile, demands for the Russian language were 15 percent in the
first
year and went up to exactly a quarter in the
next
year.

In stark contrast,
however
, both other activities plunged in necessity. Requirements for math which was the
first
required subject in 2017, accounting for 40 percent.
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But
it dropped
dramatically
to
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just
under a fifth in 2018. Demands for history were exactly a fifth in 2017 and a
slightly
lower 19 percent in 2018.

IELTS academic The figures below compare the requirements for different subjects at well center between 2017 and 2018.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
131 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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