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The line graph shows information about the growth of world population figures from 1880 to 2100 while the bar chart indicates urban population figures in different world regions.

The line graph shows information about the growth of world population figures from 1880 to 2100 while the bar chart indicates urban population figures in different world regions. a798G
The line graph shows information about the growth of world population figures from 1880 to 2100 while the bar chart indicates urban population figures in different world regions. To begin, in 1980, the population was 1000 millions of people and this was the lowest figure in the line graph. Second, from 1980 to 1920, the world population increased gradually, and grew by approximately two times compared to the first. Third, between 1920 and 1960, a turning point in line bar, the number of residents started to go up sharply, becoming two times in only 40 years and it was about 3000 millions of people. Next, the population rose significantly by 5000 millions of people from 1960 to 2040, and hit the highest point in 2040. Nonetheless, it is estimated that it will level off after the highest peak, and then fall gradually to the 22nd century to 6000 millions of people. By far, The number of people in developing countries was about 2200 millions of people in 2015, and it swelled dramatically to 4000 millions of people in 2040. It is almost two times higher than that of 2015. Meanwhile, the quantity of people in developed regions remained unchanged from 2015 to 2040, and it’s about 1300 millions of people. In conclusion, the population shot up from 1980 to 2040 and will reach the highest peak in 2040. In the same fashion, the number of people in developing countries also went up and hit the highest point in 2040. In contrast, the quantity of people in developed countries carry on the same number over time.
The line graph
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information about the growth of world
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population
figures from 1880 to 2100 while the bar chart indicates urban
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population
figures in
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different
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To
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begin
, in 1980, the
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population
was 1000
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millions
of
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people
and this was the lowest figure in the line graph. Second, from 1980 to 1920, the world
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population
increased
gradually
, and grew by approximately two
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compared to the
first
. Third, between 1920 and 1960, a turning point in line bar, the
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number
of residents
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started
to go up
sharply
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40 years and it was about 3000
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millions
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Next
, the
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population
rose
significantly
by 5000
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of
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from 1960 to 2040, and hit the highest point in 2040. Nonetheless, it
is estimated
that it will level off after the highest peak, and then fall
gradually
to the 22nd century to 6000
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By far, The
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developing countries
was about 2200
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in 2015, and it swelled
dramatically
to 4000
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in 2040. It is almost two
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higher than that of 2015. Meanwhile, the quantity of
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people
in developed regions remained unchanged from 2015 to 2040, and it’s about 1300
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In conclusion
, the
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shot up from 1980 to 2040 and will reach the highest peak in 2040. In the same fashion, the
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number
of
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in
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developing countries
also
went up and hit the highest point in 2040.
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developed countries
carry on the same
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IELTS academic The line graph shows information about the growth of world population figures from 1880 to 2100 while the bar chart indicates urban population figures in different world regions.

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