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The line graph shows how the young population in the UK changed during the 1990s compared to their rate over the course of a decade.

The line graph shows how the young population in the UK changed during the 1990s compared to their rate over the course of a decade. KGlaM
The line graph shows how the young population in the UK changed during the 1990s compared to their rate over the course of a decade. Overall, trends show that the proportion of toddlers has decreased, while the proportion of 10-14 year olds has increased over time. A look at the graph shows the percentage of babies (0-4 years old) falling in the UK over time. This proportion among young people in the UK reached 26% in 1990 and falls to 23. 5% in 2021. In contrast, the proportion of 10-14 year olds has increased significantly over the same period and is 26% higher in year 2001. Another highlight on the chart is that the UK youth population (15_19 years old) fell sharply between 1990 and 1994 when it hit a low of almost 23%. However, it increased and reached 25% in 2001. Finally, British children aged 5-9 were more than 26% from 1995 to 1997 but the proportion gradually decreased and eventually fell to just over 26%. more than 25% in 2001.
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how the young population in the UK
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during the 1990s compared to their rate
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the course of a decade.

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, trends
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that the
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of toddlers has decreased, while the
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of 10-14
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olds has increased
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A look at the graph
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the percentage of babies (0-4 years
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falling in the UK
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time. This
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among young
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in the UK reached 26% in 1990 and falls to 23. 5% in 2021.
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, the
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of 10-14
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olds has increased
significantly
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the same period and is 26% higher in
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2001.

Another highlight on the chart is that the UK youth population (15_19 years
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fell
sharply
between 1990 and 1994 when it hit a low of almost 23%.
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, it increased and reached 25% in 2001.
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, British children aged 5-9 were more than 26% from 1995 to 1997
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26%.
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than 25% in 2001.

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