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The line graph illustrates the amount of people’s Asia, the UK and other country living in Autralia from 1976 to 2011

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The line graph illustrates the amount of people’s Asia, the UK and other country living in Autralia from 1976 to 2011. Can be seen from praph, percentage of UK was towards decreasing in 36 years. In addition, Asia was tending upwards living in Australia. The rates people born in UK went down significanly from about 14% in 1976 to 10% in 1986 then it kept a speed fall at 5% in 2011. Furthermore, Other country had a sharp fluctuation when was 11% at 1976 and declined to 7. 5% in 1986 whereas it increased dramatically at 14% in 2008 but it was still 13% in 2011. The figure for Asia went up continuously at 2. 7% in 1976 to 7% in 1996 and reached a peak at 15% in 2011. The all people in the world lived in Autralia decreased moderately when it at 23% in 1976 and reduced at 21. 5% in 2001 and trending comeback started in 2001 which was climbed markedly at 25 in 2011.
The line graph illustrates the amount of
people
’s Asia, the UK and other country living in
Autralia
from 1976 to 2011.

Can be
seen
from
praph
, percentage of UK was towards decreasing in 36 years.
In addition
, Asia was tending upwards living in Australia.

The rates
people
born in UK went down
significanly
from about 14% in 1976 to 10% in 1986 then it
kept
a speed fall at 5% in 2011.
Furthermore
, Other country had a sharp fluctuation when was 11% at 1976 and declined to 7. 5% in 1986 whereas it increased
dramatically
at 14% in 2008
but
it was
still
13% in 2011.

The figure for Asia went up
continuously
at 2. 7% in 1976 to 7% in 1996 and reached a peak at 15% in 2011. The all
people
in the world
lived
in
Autralia
decreased
moderately
when it at 23% in 1976 and
reduced
at 21. 5% in 2001 and trending comeback
started
in 2001 which
was climbed
markedly
at 25 in 2011.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the amount of people’s Asia, the UK and other country living in Autralia from 1976 to 2011

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