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The line graph gives the recycling ratio of paper and cardboard, glass containers, aluminum cans, and plastics from 1982 to 2010. O

The line graph gives the recycling ratio of paper and cardboard, glass containers, aluminum cans, and plastics from 1982 to 2010. O VQWNO
The line graph gives the recycling ratio of paper and cardboard, glass containers, aluminum cans, and plastics from 1982 to 2010. Overall, the recycling rate of glass containers fluctuated along with paper and cardboard, while aluminum cans and plastic saw growth in their percentages. Although after fluctuating paper and cardboard ended as mainly reproduced products among other items; in 1981, during the beginning, 60% of paper and cardboard was recycled which later grew up to 70% in 1996. After two periods, the regeneration of this selective item was reduced from 70% to nearly 60%. in midst of 2006 and 2010, the recorded value was almost 70%. On the other hand, glass containers were reported to have the second-most percentage of recycling. It was reproduced 5% more in the end than it's the previous value of 50% Apart from this, plastics and aluminum cand noted an increase in their production. However, cans percentages grew significantly, more than 30%, but plastic saw very minimum growth of 10%.
The line graph gives the recycling ratio of paper and cardboard, glass containers, aluminum cans, and
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plastics
from 1982 to 2010.
Overall
, the recycling rate of glass containers fluctuated along with paper and cardboard, while aluminum cans and
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plastic
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saw
growth in their percentages.

Although after fluctuating paper and cardboard ended as
mainly
reproduced products among other items; in 1981, during the beginning, 60% of paper and cardboard
was recycled
which later grew up to 70% in 1996. After two periods, the regeneration of this selective item was
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reduced
from 70% to
nearly
60%.
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in
midst of 2006 and 2010, the recorded value was almost 70%.
On the other hand
, glass containers
were reported
to have the second-most percentage of recycling. It
was reproduced
5% more in the
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end
than it's the previous value of 50%

Apart from this,
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plastics
and aluminum
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cand
noted an increase in their production.
However
, cans percentages grew
significantly
, more than 30%,
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plastic
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saw
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minimum growth of 10%.
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