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The line graph below shows the number of birds of different types sighted at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary between 2001 and 2014.

The line graph below shows the number of birds of different types sighted at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary between 2001 and 2014. 0AnL1
The line graph provides information about how the numbers of three kinds of birds sighted at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary changed over a period of 13 years (2001-2014). Overall, it can be clearly observed that the numbers of all types of birds experienced a significant rise with time and flamingos recorded the highest count throughout the years. In the year 2001, the numbers of kingfisher, black beak pelican and flamingo were 200, 1000 and 3000 respectively. After a span of 2 years the numbers of kingfisher experienced a slight growth and recorded at 500. In comparison, black beak pelican and flamingo figures rose considerably to 3000 and 5000 respectively. In the year 2005, the count of kingfishers was 2500, while the other two species had significantly high totals. Over the course of next 3 years, flamingo counts levelled out at approximately 9000. The population of black beak pelican in the bird sanctuary saw a marginal decline in the same time period. Notably, the kingfisher was the only species that showed an increase in numbers. In 2014, the numbers of flamingo were approximately 4500 more than that of black beak pelican and approximately 7500 higher as compared to kingfishers.
The line graph provides information about how the
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of all types of
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experienced a significant rise with time and flamingos recorded the highest count throughout the years.

In the
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2001, the
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of kingfisher, black
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beak
pelican and flamingo were 200, 1000 and 3000
respectively
. After a span of 2 years the
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of kingfisher experienced a slight growth and recorded at 500.
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, black
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pelican and flamingo figures rose
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to 3000 and 5000
respectively
.

In the
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2005, the count of kingfishers was 2500, while the other two species had
significantly
high totals. Over the course of
next
3 years, flamingo counts levelled out at approximately 9000. The population of black
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beak
pelican in the
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sanctuary
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a marginal decline in the same time period.
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, the kingfisher was the
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species that
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of flamingo were approximately 4500 more than that of black
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beak
pelican and approximately 7500 higher
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