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The line chart illustrates the number of thefts in four European nations from 1999 to 2009.

The line chart illustrates the number of thefts in four European nations from 1999 to 2009. Overall, the figure for thefts in all four nations fluctuated over the period of 10 years. Furthermore, Great Britain saw the highest remain during the period shown. In the 1990-1993 period, the number of thefts per thousand vehicles in Britain fluctuated, although it always remained above 15 thefts. Moreover, in the following 3 years, the Britain thefts increased sharply to about 19%, which was its highest point during the 9-year period. Throughout the remainder of the period, there was a gradual decline in the number of thefts, which fell to 16% by the year 1999. France also saw a marked fluctuation from 1990-1995, and then gradually dropped to 6% by 1999. From 1990 to 1996, the number of Swedish thefts increased slightly to exactly 12%. Throughout the remainder of the period, its number remained above 10% and then saw a significant rise by the year 1999. Canadian experienced a gradual decline, falling to 6% in 1993. By the year 1999, the number of Canadian thefts has smoothly increased to 8%.
The line chart illustrates the
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in four European nations from 1999 to 2009.

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, the figure for
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thefts
in all four nations fluctuated over the
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period
of 10 years.
Furthermore
, Great Britain
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the highest remain during the
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shown.

In the 1990-1993
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, the
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of
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thefts
per thousand vehicles in Britain fluctuated, although it always remained above 15
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thefts
.
Moreover
, in the following 3 years, the Britain
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increased
sharply
to about 19%, which was its highest point during the
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9-year
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period
. Throughout the remainder of the
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period
, there was a gradual decline in the
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number
of
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thefts
, which fell to 16% by the
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year
1999. France
also
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saw
a marked fluctuation from 1990-1995, and then
gradually
dropped to 6% by 1999.

From 1990 to 1996, the
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number
of Swedish
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thefts
increased
slightly
to exactly 12%. Throughout the remainder of the
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period
, its
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remained above 10% and then
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saw
a significant rise by the
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1999. Canadian experienced a gradual decline, falling to 6% in 1993. By the
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1999, the
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of Canadian
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thefts
has
smoothly
increased to 8%.
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IELTS academic The line chart illustrates the number of thefts in four European nations from 1999 to 2009.

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