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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. N0BN
The provided graphs give us the number of students enrolling into austrailan universities in the decade 2001-2010. Information has been provided on both national and international students. Total applicants are highlighted in red while blue represent the students which actually commenced with their course. The first graph shows us the number of overseas students which apply to australian universitites has gone up steadily in the past decade, with the annual increase being around 25, 000; with highest number of students, 800000, applyinng in 2010. It is immedietly apparant that, domestic students far out number the international students in the first half of the decade. Although in the second half, the number local applicants have ceased to increase and have maintained a steady high at about 600, 000 students each year thereafter. Overall we can conclude that, in the past decade both over seas and local student enrollment rates have incresed significantly, more so for over seas students. A common trend in both graphs is that only abou 50% of the enrolled students actully commence with their courses.
The provided graphs give us the
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which actually commenced with their course.

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local applicants have ceased to increase and have maintained a steady high at about 600, 000
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each year thereafter.

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we can conclude that, in the past decade both
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

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