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Australian household energy use and greenhouse gas emissions

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The given pie charts illustrate the data on what kind of energy is used and distinctions of the household energy usage caused to the emission of gaseous in an average Australian household. Overall, the majority of energy is consumed for heating by Australian households. Then the second-highest figure is water heating, which emits the most greenhouse gases. Another general perspective finds that cooling has the lowest figure in using energy and release greenhouse gas in two charts. An initial analysis reveals that almost half of the energy consumption accounts for heating with 42% after water heating and other appliances are following it 30%, 15% respectively. While heating has the largest proportion in used energy, it is in the third place with a 15 percentage behind the heating water(32%) and other appliances (28%). It is clear that water heating has a mere 2% difference between the two charts. On the other hand, cooling, lighting, and refrigeration show the lowest figures in both amounts of energy and gas emission. Only two percent of energy is used for cooling by household, for lightning and refrigeration 4% and 7% successively. Since small amounts of energy are used in these categories, they also have the least proportion for greenhouse gas emissions.
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pie charts illustrate the data on what kind of
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energy
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used
and distinctions of the household
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energy
usage caused to the emission of gaseous in an average Australian household.

Overall
, the majority of
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energy
is consumed
for
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heating
by Australian households. Then the second-highest figure is
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water
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heating
, which emits the most greenhouse gases. Another general perspective finds that cooling has the lowest figure in using
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energy
and release greenhouse gas in two charts.

An initial analysis reveals that almost half of the
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energy
consumption accounts for
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heating
with 42% after
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water
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heating
and other appliances are following it 30%, 15%
respectively
. While
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heating
has the largest proportion in
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used
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energy
, it is in the third place with a 15 percentage behind the
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heating
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water(32%)
and other appliances (28%). It is
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clear
that
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water
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heating
has a mere 2% difference between the two charts.

On the other hand
, cooling, lighting, and refrigeration
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show
the lowest figures in both amounts of
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energy
and gas emission.
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Only
two percent of
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energy
is
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used
for cooling by household, for lightning and refrigeration 4% and 7%
successively
. Since
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small
amounts of
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energy
are
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used
in these categories, they
also
have the least proportion for greenhouse gas emissions.
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IELTS academic Australian household energy use and greenhouse gas emissions

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