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The graphs below show the amount of money spent on protecting crops in three different regions of the world in 2005.

The graphs below show the amount of money spent on protecting crops in three different regions of the world in 2005. xDo3o
The line chart demonstrates total expenditure on crop protection in three areas namely Africa, Europe and Australia in 2005. Overall, the protection cost for crops in Africa and Australia showed a rise over the period, while the expense for that of Europe experienced a downward trend. From the beginning of 2005, the price for protecting harvests in Africa and Australia in millions were 600 and 200 respectively. Africa started with 600 million expenditure in January. That was followed by a time of three months when numbers fell to 400 million, then experienced a rapid surge to approximately 900 million and became the domineering category. The sum for that of Africa increased steadily throughout the year, reaching roughly 900 million in December; however, it remained to have the lowest budget compared to others in the end. On the other hand, in early 2005, the crops protection budget of Europe (800 million) was the highest among these three countries. Nevertheless, it steeply dropped to 400 million, being about 500 million less than that of Africa at the end of 2005.
The line chart demonstrates total expenditure on crop protection in three areas
namely
Africa, Europe and Australia in 2005.
Overall
, the protection cost for crops in Africa and Australia
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showed
a rise over the period, while the expense for that of Europe experienced a downward trend.

From the beginning of 2005, the price for protecting harvests in Africa and Australia in
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millions
were 600 and 200
respectively
. Africa
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started
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expenditure in January. That
was followed
by a time of three months when numbers fell to 400
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million
, then experienced a rapid surge to approximately 900
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million
and became the domineering category. The sum for that of Africa increased
steadily
throughout the year, reaching roughly 900
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million
in December;
however
, it remained to have the lowest budget compared to others in the
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end
.

On the other hand
, in early 2005, the
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protection budget of Europe (800
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was the highest among these three countries.
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, it
steeply
dropped to 400
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million
, being about 500
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less than that of Africa at the
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end
of 2005.
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