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The diagram below show two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes. A swing basket and b rope and bucket.

The diagram below show two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes. A swing basket and b rope and bucket. Glg1w
The information is regarding to changing the two ways of collecting water for irrigation purposes Summarise. First method is swing basket and second is rope and bucket reporting the main function and make comparisons has been shown in diagram. In ancient time people used very different method to collect water for irrigation purposes. It is called a swing basket. In this technique two person are stand on the side of field and use bucket which is made by bamboo for collecting water for irrigation. They tie a rope with bucket and then through on a river which is 1-2 meter deep or then pull up along with through water in fields. It is very hard work for every person which is work in field. In second method, the rope and bucket people use their pet animal for collecting the water for irrigation. In the way of rope and bucket, the bucket is attached with rope and through in well which is 50 metres deep. The ropes are tie with buffalo. The people make a slope which is very helpful for animals because they easily pull the bucket with the help of pulley and rollers. On other rope is tie with the side of bucket which is helpful to through water in the field. Overall there are many differences between in swing basket and rope basket. In swing basket the people collect water from river and in rope and bucket they collect water with the help of their pet animals.
The information is
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regarding to
changing the two ways of collecting
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water
for irrigation purposes
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Summarise
.
First
method is
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swing
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basket
and second is
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rope
and
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bucket
reporting the main function and
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make
comparisons has
been shown
in diagram. In ancient time
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people
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used
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very
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different
method to collect
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water
for irrigation purposes. It
is called
a
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swing
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basket
. In this technique two
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person
are stand on the side of
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field
and
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use
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bucket
which
is made
by bamboo for collecting
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water
for irrigation. They tie a
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rope
with
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bucket
and then
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through
on a river which is 1-2 meter deep or then pull up along with
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through
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water
in
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fields
. It is
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very
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hard
work for every person which is work in
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field
. In second method, the
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rope
and
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bucket
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people
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use
their pet animal for collecting the
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water
for irrigation. In the way of
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rope
and
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bucket
, the
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bucket
is attached
with
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rope
and
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through
in well which is 50
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metres
deep. The
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ropes
are tie with buffalo. The
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people
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make
a slope which is
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very
helpful for animals
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because
they
easily
pull the
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bucket
with the
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help
of pulley and rollers. On other
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rope
is tie with the side of
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bucket
which is helpful to
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through
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water
in the
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field
.
Overall
there are
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many
differences between in
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swing
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basket
and
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rope
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basket
. In
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swing
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basket
the
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people
collect
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water
from river and in
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rope
and
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bucket
they collect
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water
with the
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help
of their pet animals.
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IELTS academic The diagram below show two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes. A swing basket and b rope and bucket.

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