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The flow chart is a clear representation of sweater production in a factor. The whole process consists of 16 different stages starting from yarn collection to shipment.

The flow chart is a clear representation of sweater production in a factor. The whole process consists of 16 different stages starting from yarn collection to shipment. Ba0B9
The flow chart is a clear representation of sweater production in a factor. The whole process consists of 16 different stages starting from yarn collection to shipment. The first stage of manufacturing of sweaters is yarn collection. After that, yarn is winded and distributed over sweater panels. After completion of knitting, online inspection is started. Once all panels are ready then they are linked to one another and inspected properly. If everything is working well, they are trimmed and moved to light checking and mending section, but product is found faulty then it will be sent to second stage of yarn winding and distribution. Since main product will be almost prepared, now just to give touchups, button holes will be created. Further it will be sent for washing, labelling and ironing process. For the last time the quality will be analyzed by factory quality team and send for folding and packing. Finally, again it will be given for last inspection and will be shipped.
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clear
representation of sweater production in a factor. The whole process consists of 16
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different
stages starting from
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yarn
collection to shipment.

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The
first
stage of manufacturing of sweaters is
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yarn
collection. After that,
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yarn
is winded
and distributed over sweater panels. After completion of knitting, online inspection is
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started
. Once all panels are ready then they
are linked
to one another and inspected
properly
. If everything is working well, they
are trimmed
and
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moved
to light checking and mending section,
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but
product
is found
faulty then it will be
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sent
to second stage of
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yarn
winding and distribution.

Since main product will be almost prepared,
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now
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just
to give
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touchups
, button holes will
be created
.
Further
it will be
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sent
for washing, labelling and ironing process. For the last time the quality will
be analyzed
by factory quality team and
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send
for folding and packing.
Finally
, again it will be
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given
for last inspection and will
be shipped
.
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IELTS academic The flow chart is a clear representation of sweater production in a factor. The whole process consists of 16 different stages starting from yarn collection to shipment.

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3 paragraphs
164 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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