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The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. VmB3
The line chart indicates the average expenditures per annual of mobile phone and residential phone in America between 2001 and 2010 Overall, it is clear from the chart that the proportion of consumer expenditures on mobile device was increased during this time period, while residential phone usages was decreased. In 2001, almost $700 were used by residential phone services and this is the highest level of its average spending for one year. In the year later, this figures gradually dropped every year. In contrast, the average of annual spending on mobile phones was just only 200$. However, using mobile phones became more popular and the average annual expenditures was climbed up since then. The proportion of using both services were equal in 2006 with around $500 per year. After that, less people used the residentail phone service and its expenditures was declined, until 2010, only $400 were spent on this service. On the other hand, spending on mobile phone was raise and reached nearly $800 in 2010.
The line chart indicates the
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expenditures
per annual of mobile
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phone
and residential
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in America between 2001 and 2010

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, it is
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clear
from the chart that the proportion of consumer
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expenditures
on mobile device
was increased
during this time period, while residential
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phone
usages
was decreased
.

In 2001, almost $700 were
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used
by residential
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phone
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services
and this is the highest level of its
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average
spending for one
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year
. In the
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year
later, this figures
gradually
dropped every
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year
.
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In
contrast, the
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of annual spending on mobile
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phones
was
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The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$200".
200$
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However
, using mobile
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phones
became more popular and the
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annual
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expenditures
was climbed
up since then.

The proportion of using both
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services
were equal in 2006 with around $500 per
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year
. After that,
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less
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residentail
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phone
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service
and its
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expenditures
was declined
, until 2010,
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only
$400
were spent
on this
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service
.
On the other hand
, spending on mobile
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phone
was raise and reached
nearly
$800 in 2010.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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