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The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. E3p5D
The chart shows the visual representation of nominal yearly expenditures on cellular phone and landline services. The collected data depicts the results for 10 years from 2001 to 2010 and the data in visualization is collected by U. S. Bureau of Labor Statistics. First, I will cover the average cost of cell phone services over these years. The cost that is approximately 700$ was at peak in 2010 which graually decreased to 400$ by the end of 2010. This sgnificant drop can be seen by merely looking at the visualized data. Secondly, the cost of resendential phone started to increase from 2001 and hit a high of about 750$ by the end of the decade. This noticeable incline shows that the cost has constantly increased between 2001 and 2010. All in all, the expense of residential phone services is reasonably high than the cell phones' expense and has increased greatly over the 10 years. Whereas the expenditure of residential phones has reduced between 2001 and 2010.
The chart
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shows
the visual representation of nominal yearly expenditures on cellular
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phone
and landline services. The collected data depicts the results for 10 years from 2001 to 2010 and the data in visualization
is collected
by U. S. Bureau of Labor Statistics.

First
, I will cover the average
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cost
of cell
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phone
services over these years. The
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cost
that is
approximately
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700$
was at peak in 2010 which
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graually
decreased to
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$400".
400$
by the
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end
of 2010. This
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sgnificant
drop can be
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seen
by
merely
looking at the visualized data.

Secondly
, the
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cost
of
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resendential
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phone
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started
to increase from 2001 and hit a high of about
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$750".
750$
by the
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end
of the decade. This noticeable incline
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shows
that the
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cost
has
constantly
increased between 2001 and 2010.

All in all, the expense of residential
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phone
services is
reasonably
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high
than the cell phones' expense and has increased
greatly
over the 10 years. Whereas the expenditure of residential
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phones
has
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reduced
between 2001 and 2010.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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