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The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009

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The line graph displays alterations for burglary, car theft and robbery in the centre of Manchester between 2003 and 2012 The most noticeable trend is that burglary fell dramatically over the period. Car theft fluctuated until 2008, upon which it rose steadily; whereas the number of robberies remained relatively stable between 2003 and 2012. Burglaries started at just below three and a half thousand in 2003 and apart from a small rise of around five hundred offences in 2004, fell drastically to just over one thousand incidents in 2008. 2009 saw a slight rise to just below fifteen hundred in 2009 and it remained in and around this figure until the end of the time period. From 2003 to 2008 the number of car thefts shifted between just below two thousand five hundred and just over two thousand, before rising steadily to nearly three thousand in 2013. Over the entire period robbery never rose above one thousand and did not go under five hundred.

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 of Manchester

between 2003 and 2012

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over
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until 2008, upon which it rose steadily
; whereas the number of robberies remained relatively
 stable

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between
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around
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 one thousand incidents in 2008.

2009 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
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just
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From 2003 to 2008 the number of car thefts shifted between This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 below two thousand five hundred

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 robbery never rose above one thousand and did not go under five Possible agreement error. The noun 'hundred' seems to be countable, so consider using: "hundreds".hundreds
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