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THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOW THE PROCES OF RECYCLING GLASS BOTTLES AND THE VARIOUS STEPS INVLOVED IN IT.

THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOW THE PROCES OF RECYCLING GLASS BOTTLES AND THE VARIOUS STEPS INVLOVED IN IT. pKoq3
THE PROVIDED PROCESS CHART ILLUSTRATES VARIOUS STEPS INVLOVED IN RECYLING GLASS BOTTLES. OVERALL, THERE ARE THREE MAIN STEPS, COLLECTION, PROCESSSING AND BOTTLING. IT BEGIN FROM COLLECTING WASTED GLASS TO READY PRODUCT. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE GLASS BOTTLES WHICH, IS THROWN AS WASTAGE IS COLLECTED IN COLLECTION POINT AND TRANSPORTED FOR WASHING PROCESS. AT THIS STAGE, THE BOTTLE WASHED UNDER HIGH PRESSURE AND DELIVERED TO GLASS FACTORY WHERE, IT BROKEN INTO TINY PIECES. IN HEATING STAGE, THE PIECES IS BURNED UNDER FURNANCE BETWEEN 600-800 FOR CERTAIN TIME PERIOD. THE PROCESS CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, THE GLASS FORMS IN LIQUID IN NATURE AND IT SETS UNDER MOULD WHERE, IT TAKE SHAPE OF A BOTTLE. THEN, THE END PRODUCT IS READY FOR BOTTLING AND IT TRANSPORTED TO SUPERMARKETS WHERE, IT IS AVAILABLE FOR SALES.
THE PROVIDED PROCESS CHART ILLUSTRATES VARIOUS STEPS
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INVLOVED
IN
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RECYLING
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GLASS
BOTTLES.

OVERALL
, THERE ARE THREE MAIN STEPS, COLLECTION,
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PROCESSSING
AND BOTTLING. IT
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BEGIN
FROM COLLECTING WASTED
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GLASS
TO READY PRODUCT.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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SEEN
THAT, THE
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GLASS
BOTTLES WHICH,
IS THROWN
AS WASTAGE
IS COLLECTED
IN COLLECTION POINT AND TRANSPORTED FOR WASHING PROCESS. AT THIS STAGE, THE BOTTLE WASHED UNDER HIGH PRESSURE AND DELIVERED TO
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GLASS
FACTORY WHERE, IT
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BROKEN
INTO TINY PIECES. IN HEATING STAGE, THE PIECES
IS BURNED
UNDER
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FURNANCE
BETWEEN 600-800 FOR CERTAIN TIME PERIOD.

THE PROCESS CHART
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, THE
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GLASS
FORMS IN LIQUID IN NATURE AND IT SETS UNDER
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MOULD
WHERE, IT TAKE SHAPE OF A BOTTLE. THEN, THE
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END
PRODUCT IS READY FOR BOTTLING AND IT TRANSPORTED TO SUPERMARKETS WHERE, IT IS AVAILABLE FOR SALES.
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