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The graph below shows the consumption of different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990

The graph below shows the consumption of different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990 XlrDA

The given line graph reveals the consumption of three fast food items of British citizens between 1970 and 1990. Overall, as it can be clearly seen fish & chips, hamburger were showing the lowest point at the beginning, demonstrated an upward trend, whereas consumption of pizza had a steady decline, having the highest point at the beginning. According to the line graph, people consumed pizza more than two items. In 1970 the number of consumers of pizza was approximately 300. Nevertheless from 1970 to 1985 this food consumption gradually went down to 200. By 1990 it was just over 200. Throughout the whole span, both fish & chips consumers were less than 100. However, from 1975 the consumption of this food showed dramatically growth. Consequently, fish & chips became most consumed food riching the pick at 500. Meanwhile, the consumption of hamburgers in 1970 was around 50. Due to the quick increase at the end of the period, it was just under 300.

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