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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years n2gK
The quantity of waste from dissimilar factories in decades measured in tonnes is illustrated in the line graph. It is worth noticing that, although both companies A and B degrade the waste throughout 15 years (from 2000 to 2015), but another company illustrated a notice surge. To begin, Factories A and B produced the least waste. They began by fairly different level of between 12 and 8 tonnes in 2000, but whereas the waste of factory A decreased gradually over the following fifteen years, the other factory was factory B experienced significant surge to around three-fifths of waste between 2000 and 2015. However, both Factories A and B in the year 2015 will be a similar trend which decreased by 8 and 3 steadily. In stark contrast, Factory C had a more noticeable surge of waste than the other factories. The number of waste started by 4 tonnes in 2000, which was lower than factories A and B, they had a fairly similar to factory C in 2010 and 2014 years, with reaching the number of waste were between 7 and 8 tonnes, but the number of waste in factory C surged rapidly to finish last year at 11 tonnes. Following this, factory C had more waste than other factories in the final year.
The quantity of
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from dissimilar
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factories
in decades measured in tonnes
is illustrated
in the line graph. It is worth noticing that, although both
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companies
A and B degrade the
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waste
throughout 15 years (from 2000 to 2015),
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but
another
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company
illustrated a notice surge.

To
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begin
,
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A and B produced the least
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waste
. They began by
fairly
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different
level of between 12 and 8 tonnes in 2000,
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but
whereas the
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of
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factory
A decreased
gradually
over the following fifteen years, the other
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was
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B experienced significant surge to around three-fifths of
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waste
between 2000 and 2015.
However
, both
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A and B in the
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2015 will be a similar trend which decreased by 8 and 3
steadily
.

In stark contrast,
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Factory
C had a more noticeable surge of
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waste
than the other
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factories
. The number of
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waste
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started
by 4 tonnes in 2000, which was lower than
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A and B, they had a
fairly
similar to
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factory
C in 2010 and 2014 years, with reaching the number of
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waste
were between 7 and 8 tonnes,
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but
the number of
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waste
in
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factory
C surged
rapidly
to finish last
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year
at 11 tonnes. Following this,
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C had more
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than other
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in the final
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years

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