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The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel. wBKxn
The outline addresses how much individuals of various profit will in general spend on fuel percentagewisely in the America and Britain. Generally speaking, it is obvious from the outline that by and large, americans spend significantly more cash on fuel, with respect to their compensations, contrasted with english individuals. Despite the fact that there is a notisable contrast between the rates of pay spent on fuel by the most extravagant individuals of the United Kingdom and the United States. The best extent of the most unfortunate individuals in America will in general spend up to 5% of their pay on fuel, while this applies to just about 2% of the least fortunate english individuals spent pay. Talking about working class individuals, the percercentage of cash spent on fuel in the UK and in the United States are about 3. 5 and 4. 5 deferentially. Moreover, the most extravagant individuals in Britain spend about 4% of their pay on fuel. Additionally to this, the most extravagant americans will in general spend around 3 to 2 percents of thier acquiring. It very well may be seen from the outline, that the percent of pay spent on fuel in America diminishes alongside the degree of wellbeing of its inhabitants. Anyway this isn't the situation with the level of cash spent on fuel in Britain, where the upward pattern can be seen as the degree of pay increments.
The outline addresses how
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individuals
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spend
on
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fuel
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percentagewisely
in the America and Britain.

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speaking, it is obvious from the outline that by and large,
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americans
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spend
significantly
more cash on
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fuel
, with respect to their compensations, contrasted with
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english
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individuals
. Despite the fact that there is a
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notisable
contrast between the rates of
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pay
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spent
on
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fuel
by the most extravagant
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individuals
of the United Kingdom and the United States.

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individuals
in America will
in general
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spend
up to 5% of their
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pay
on
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fuel
, while this
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applies to
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just
about 2% of the least fortunate
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individuals
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spent
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pay
. Talking about working
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class
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individuals
, the
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percercentage
of cash
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spent
on
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in the UK and in the United States are about 3. 5 and 4. 5
deferentially
.
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, the most extravagant
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individuals
in Britain
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spend
about 4% of their
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on
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fuel
.
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to this, the most extravagant
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around 3 to 2 percents of
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acquiring.

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well may be
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from the outline, that the percent of
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pay
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spent
on
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fuel
in America diminishes alongside the degree of
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wellbeing
of its inhabitants. Anyway this isn't the situation with the level of cash
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spent
on
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fuel
in Britain, where the upward pattern can be
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pay
increments.
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel.

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