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The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. qbew
The rendered linear chart visualizes the information regarding ulteration in birth as well as death rate in New Zealand between the time interval of 1901 to 2101. Overall, it is pellucid that in the intial years the consensus of birth rate was higher than death rate but in final years it is estimated that death rate would be higher than birth rate. To initiate with, in 1901, the proportion of birth rate was 20 thousands and after 2 decades this ratio was escalated by 5 thousands. Moreover, the birth rate reached to its peak in 1961. In 2021 this proportion stood at approximately 50 thousands and furthermore, it is estimated that in final years birth rate would follow zig-zag trend and reach to nearly 42 thousands in 2101. Delving futher to the number of death rate, in initial year 1901, this proportion was just below than 10 thousands and upto 2001, the rate showed few ups and downs. After 2021, it is forcasted that number of death rate will show gradual increase in its ratio and reach to its highest point amounting to about 60 thousands in 2061 and afterward again cosensus will decline to 57 thousands in 2101.
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in New Zealand between the time interval of 1901 to 2101.

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, it is pellucid that in the
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intial
years the consensus of
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birth
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rate
was higher than death
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rate
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in final years it
is estimated
that death
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rate
would be higher than
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birth
rate.

To initiate with, in 1901, the proportion of
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birth
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rate
was 20 thousands and after 2 decades this ratio
was escalated
by 5 thousands.
Moreover
, the
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birth
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reached to its peak in 1961. In 2021 this proportion stood at approximately 50 thousands and
furthermore
, it
is estimated
that in final years
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birth
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rate
would follow
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zig-zag
trend and reach to
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42 thousands in 2101.

Delving
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rate
, in initial
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1901, this proportion was
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than 10 thousands and
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upto
2001, the
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few ups and downs. After 2021, it is
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forcasted
that number of death
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gradual increase in its ratio and reach to its highest point amounting to about 60 thousands in 2061 and afterward again
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will decline to 57 thousands in 2101.
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