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the graph and table below show the average monthly temperature and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

The graph indicates the average temperature of three major cities in a monthly manner whereas the table illustrates the total annual hour of sunshine for London, New York and Sydney. According to the graph there is a significant increase in the average temperature of New York and London. Meanwhile, we can see the temperature for Sydney had a downfall with. In the month of march there was a major change in temperature of New York. Sydney's temperature had decreased in July but in New York and London the temperature fall was in the month of august. In the table we can see a major difference between the annual hours of sunshine of London and the other two cities. London had 1180 hours of annual sunshine, New York had 2535 hours and Sydney had 2473 hours.
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of three major cities in a monthly manner whereas the table illustrates the total annual
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of sunshine for London,
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York and Sydney. According to the graph there is a significant increase in the average
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for Sydney had a downfall with. In the month of march there was a major
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had decreased in July
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fall was in the month of august. In the table we can
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a major difference between the annual
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of sunshine of London and the other two cities. London had 1180
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of annual sunshine,
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IELTS academic the graph and table below show the average monthly temperature and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

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