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ㅤ: The given table depicts the total number of sales of several items such as coffee, tea pastries and sandwiches, on a weekday, in an office by a particular coffee shop. Overall, it is lucid that in early morning time consumption of everything is high rather than sandwiches. At a fleeting glance, it is immensely clear that consumption of coffee is nearly double that of tea in the morning time which is 265units. Moving further to evening time, sales of tea is one-fourth of coffee that is 35 units. Similarly, at the time of 10. 30 to 2. 30, it is one-third and it is 2. 5times more at 5. 30 to 8. 30. Further scrutinising the data, pastries are much more popular than sandwiches, about 5times of sales of sandwiches that are 50 units. On contrary, they are way more well-known than pastries, at 10. 30-2. 30, which is nearly double in figures. They again plunged to 40 from 150 in the afternoon time and then surged to 110 from 80 in the evening, at 5. 30-8. 30.

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 table depicts the total number of sales of several items such as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
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 the data, pastries are much more popular than sandwiches, about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 of sales of sandwiches that are 50 units. On contrary, they are way more well-known than pastries, at 10. 30-2. 30, which is nearly
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 and then surged to 110 from 80 in the evening, at 5. 30-8. 30. 