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The given graph show the percentage of visitors who visit various countries

The given graph show the percentage of visitors who visit various countries M3BYa

The information regarding commuters, who were arrived in distinct places of world namely, North America, Central, Eastern Europe, South east Asia and Sub Saharan Africa, south America has been depicted in stipulate linear graph. Overall, it is manifested that the maximum number of tourist visited to North America. While, the minimum amount of pilgrims appeared in South America as well as Sub Saharan Africa. Having bird's eye view, it is crystal clear that In 2000, the highest data of visitors reached in North America (90millions) as compared to Central and Eastern Europe (near about 70millions). From 1990 to 2005, the amount of backpackers elevated dramatically with ranging from 30million to 90 million in Central and Eastern Europe. Whereas, it saw moderate change in number of visitors in South east Asia in between 1990 and 2005. Further scrutinizing, the more details of graph is that almost similar amount of tourist was witnessed in Sub Saharan Africa and South America, from 1990to 2000, which was accounted to 12 million respectively. But after 2000 South America showed least amount of commuters (20million) in contrast of Sub Saharan Africa (25million).

The information regarding commuters, who were arrived
 in distinct places of world namely
, North America, Central, Eastern Europe, South If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.East Asia
east Asia
 and Sub Saharan Africa, Capitalize specific, well-defined geographical regions: "South America"South America
south America
 has been depicted
 in stipulate linear graph. Overall
, it is manifested
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amount
 of pilgrims appeared in South America as well
 as Sub Saharan Africa. Having bird's eye view, it is crystal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that In 2000, the highest data of visitors reached in North America You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
(90millions)
 as compared to Central and Eastern Europe (near about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
70millions)
. From 1990 to 2005, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amount
 of backpackers elevated dramatically
 with ranging from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
30million
 to 90 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 in Central and Eastern Europe. Whereas, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 moderate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in number of visitors in South If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.East Asia
east Asia
 in between 1990 and 2005. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Further,
Further
 scrutinizing, the more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of graph is that almost similar You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amount
 of tourist was witnessed
 in Sub Saharan Africa and South America, from 1990to 2000, which was accounted
 to 12 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
respectively
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 after 2000 South America This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
A determiner is probably missing here: "the least".the least
least
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amount
 of commuters You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
(20million)
in contrast
 of Sub Saharan Africa You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
(25million)
. 