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The given chart illustrates the amount of money earn by export business in the year 2015 and 2016.

The given chart illustrates the amount of money earn by export business in the year 2015 and 2016. KGd56
The given chart illustrates the amount of money earn by export business in the year 2015 and 2016. Also, the given table describes the proportion of change in each product export in 2016 as compared with 2015. Overall the earning of petroleum products was the highest in the year 2016 among all products. Nevertheless, in the year 2015 least money earned by textiles industry. It is clear from the bar chart that, 60 billions earn by petroleum export inthe year 2015. Whereas, it was slightly high in the year 2016. The peak of textile export was dipped at 27 billions in the year 2015. Further, almost similar amount of money earn by agriculture export in both years, which is above 30 billions. in the year 2016, the position of textile export was equal to agriculture products. Moreover, engineered products reached above 60 billions in the year 2016. It was slightly less in the year 2015. It can be seen that, textile industry increased 15. 24 % of export in the year 2016 as compared to 2015. The petroleum product's business increased 3% in the year 2016. The export of gems and jewellery fell by 5. 18 % in the year 2016 as compared to 2015. The proportion of agriculture products increased minimally, which is 0. 82% in the year 2016.
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in 2016 as compared with 2015.

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was the highest in the
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2016 among all
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.
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2015 least money earned by
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from the bar chart that, 60
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earn by petroleum
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2016. The peak of
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2016, the position of
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was equal to agriculture
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.
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, engineered
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reached above 60
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2016. It was
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industry increased 15. 24 % of
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in the
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2016 as compared to 2015. The petroleum product's business increased 3% in the
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2016. The
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of gems and
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fell by 5. 18 % in the
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2016 as compared to 2015. The proportion of agriculture
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increased
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2016.
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IELTS academic The given chart illustrates the amount of money earn by export business in the year 2015 and 2016.

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